Oh, if you haven't started yet, I can give you a better version. After I sent you your current version, I reread it and was like, "What? I thought I fixed that plothole!" Grr.
But, yeah, I'd like to think I'm much more gracious about receiving feedback. Even primers on Platonic philosophy shouldn't be painful to read. :D
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on 2010-08-06 08:25 am (UTC)But, yeah, I'd like to think I'm much more gracious about receiving feedback. Even primers on Platonic philosophy shouldn't be painful to read. :D